“Copy: this sentence about Brendan Levy is confusing to read — 'having led the medical groups or built the clinical products at Hims & Hers, Lemonaid Health, Wheel, and GoodRx' doesn't make clear which company he led vs. built products at, and the 'or' reads like an unedited draft. Consider splitting into two clear clauses, e.g. naming which companies he led medical groups at and which he built clinical products at.”
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Copy: this sentence about Brendan Levy is confusing to read — 'having led the medical groups or built the clinical products at Hims & Hers, Lemonaid Health, Wheel, and GoodRx' doesn't make clear which company he led vs. built products at, and the 'or' reads like an unedited draft. Consider splitting into two clear clauses, e.g. naming which companies he led medical groups at and which he built clinical products at.
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